Rewriting “America” by Walt Whitman.

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Learning Targets:

  • I can create a narrative in a poem using strong word choice, descriptive details, and imagery to convey experiences and events.
  • Create an impact with my poem; readers can experience the desired reaction or emotional response to my poem.
  • Enhance the meaning and impact of my poem with powerful visual elements, such as backgrounds, images, font choices, colors, and so on.

Channel your inner Uncle Walt to rewrite the poem, line by line, mimicking Whitman’s voice, style, and form — but from  a different point of view from the Civil War Era, from your National History Day topic, or from a contemporary point of view.

Pay special attention to voice and word choice; capture your chosen perspective through the voice and word choice.

Compose your rough draft on loose-leaf. Your rough draft must make it through Doc’s “Ack!” “Boring!” and “I hate it!” stamps before it can be considered a final draft. When you have a final draft, type it up on GoogleDocs and submit it on GoogleClassroom.

Additionally, create an 8.5 x 11” poster for your poem, as you did for your found poem in “The Fiery Trial.” We will hang these posters on our lockers.

Check the learning targets. Make sure your work is hitting the targets. Please follow all instructions given.


Centre of equal daughters, equal sons,

All, all alike endear’d, grown, ungrown, young

         or old,

Strong, ample, fair, enduring, capable, rich,

Perennial with the Earth, with Freedom, Law

         and Love,

A grand, sane, towering, seated Mother,

Chair’d in the adamant of Time.


The GoogleDoc of this assignment is on GoogleClassroom.

 

 

What We’re Working On…

Friends, it’s a terrible time for me to be out with all the stuff we’ve got going on, but such is life…

Today in class, please make wise, wise, wise use of your time. You have two major writing projects plus two upcoming assessments to focus on.

The writing projects are due at the end of THIS WEEK.

We’ll get to the assessments, one on Vocabulary List #2 and one on NoRedInk (covering parts of speech, commas and conjunctions, semicolons, independent vs. dependent clauses, and subjects vs. verbs) next week.

I apologize for missing more time with y’all. See you soon.

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We have two major writing projects going right now:

Secession MiniQ Essay

Secession MiniQ Essay Final Draft Instructions – Be sure you carefully follow all instructions.

Found Poetry

Found Poetry Rubric

All the related documents are on GoogleClassroom.

BECAUSE OF TECH WEEK, I AM CHANGING THE DUE DATE TO MONDAY 12/4. IF YOU ARE INVOLVED WITH DRAMA AND NEED ADDITIONAL TIME, SEE ME INDIVIDUALLY. THANKS! GO, USM DRAMACATS!

Secession Statements MiniQ

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Why secede?

Learning Targets for Reading:

  • I can closely read and analyze primary source documents.
  • I can identify, analyze and discuss Notice and Note Nonfiction signposts in texts.
  • I can draw evidence and examples from a text that most strongly support my summary, analysis, ideas, opinions, and/or reflection about it.

Learning Targets for Writing:

  • I can compose a clear, concise claim (a.k.a. thesis statement) that identifies my main, central argument.
  • I can support my claim with evidence and examples.
  • I can explain my evidence with sound reasoning that demonstrates how it supports my claim.
  • I can write with an academic voice, which is more formal and less conversational.
  • I can accurately cite the sources of my evidence.
  • I can communicate my ideas and opinions clearly and properly with solid conventions.
  • I can follow all instructions provided. Note: This score is either a 0 or a 3 and cannot be reassessed.

Find all of the documents on GoogleClassroom.

If you find the buckets, chickenfoot, and outline helpful, please use them! Find and use the writing tools that work best for YOU.

 

A little more time…

 

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Friends, one of the messages I received at conferences is that you’re feeling a little overwhelmed and need a little time and space to work and catch up. I get that! We have a long list of goals we’re working on right now. Use this time wisely to accomplish those goals.

  • Vocabulary
  • NoRedInk
  • Reassessments
  • Abolition
  • Visual Analysis
  • Readings with Notice and Note Annotations
  • Found Poetry
  • NHD…
    • Buckets
    • Research Questions
    • Sources
    • Notes

 

Reassessing “This I Believe.”

You may resubmit “This I Believe” essays up until Wednesday 11/8. I will not accept any revisions after that date.

Please note, you must follow all of the instructions on the Reassessment Request form. You’ll need a hard copy of this form, which you can pick up in my classroom or print from GoogleDocs. You’ll need to meet with me one-on-one to discuss your plan for revision.

When you resubmit, you will need to hand in the original rubric, so don’t lose it! You’ll also submit the reassessment request form.

Follow ALL instructions; if you do not, I will not reassess your work.

In class on Wed 10/11 and Thurs 10/12…

The Mini-Q buckets, chicken foot graphic organizers, and the outline guide are due for EVERYONE on Monday 10/16. Everyone will have English on Monday 10/16.

While I’m out, you’re working on your Mini-Q and taking the Bar Exam! If you finish up both these monumental achievements, then do some NoRedInk, study for the vocab test, practice typing, or read your outside reading book!

Please feel free to email me questions. Or ask Xave to text me. 😉

Click here for the screencast on bucketing and chickenfooting!

Keep your hard copy buckets and chickenfoot graphic organizer in your binder. I will collect them when I return to school. Thanks!

Click here for the screencast on the outline guide!

Submit your outline guide on GoogleClassroom.


Note: Wednesday 10/11 is the last day to turn in vocabulary sketchnotes revisions. If you revise and resubmit, you must hand them in to Ms. Roadhouse directly. Ms. Roadhouse will initial your sketchnotes to prove that you handed them in when they were due. Sorry to say, but Mrs. Erlandson cannot and will not accept them on Thursday or Friday…